Thursday, September 30, 2010

Mag 34

Light the light . . .

pour the wine . . .

Tonight . . .

Tonight . . .

You'll be mine!

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20 comments:

  1. Short and sweet! Try the rhythmic effect of one more syllable in the last line . . .

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  2. Wow...Short,hopeful with oozing confidence...!

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  3. Lovely, short and sweet!

    Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/mag-34/

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  4. that's direct and powerful.
    aptly put.

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  5. Woo hoo that sounds like a fun night!

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  6. I agree with the good doctor ... short and sweet!!! And fun.

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  7. ah, lamplight is romantic...
    simple, very nice magpie...

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  8. Heart! Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender

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  9. nothing like cutting to the chase...with clear motives and direction

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  10. You guys can only think of one thing...;-)

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  11. Simple, direct, maybe foretelling...

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  12. Simple & Sensual! Nice Magpie!!!

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  13. "Tonight tonight!" Yes tonight! Simply divine!

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  14. You make me smile so eloquently!
    :-)

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