Yay, yay!:Ddoomed if I do, doomed if I don't
Short and sweet! Try the rhythmic effect of one more syllable in the last line . . .
Wow...Short,hopeful with oozing confidence...!
Lovely, short and sweet!Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/mag-34/
quick & i love the stark appeal of the poem.When The Lamps Never Light
I like it! :-)My Magpie
that's direct and powerful.aptly put.
Woo hoo that sounds like a fun night!
I agree with the good doctor ... short and sweet!!! And fun.
ah, lamplight is romantic...simple, very nice magpie...
Heart! Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender
nothing like cutting to the chase...with clear motives and direction
You guys can only think of one thing...;-)
Simple, direct, maybe foretelling...
Simple & Sensual! Nice Magpie!!!
"Tonight tonight!" Yes tonight! Simply divine!
You make me smile so eloquently!:-)
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