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Thursday, September 30, 2010

Mag 34

Light the light . . .

pour the wine . . .

Tonight . . .

Tonight . . .

You'll be mine!

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20 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Yay, yay!

:D

doomed if I do, doomed if I don't

Doctor FTSE said...

Short and sweet! Try the rhythmic effect of one more syllable in the last line . . .

Erratic Thoughts said...

Wow...Short,hopeful with oozing confidence...!

Millie said...

Lovely, short and sweet!

Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/mag-34/

Arian Tejano said...

quick & i love the stark appeal of the poem.

When The Lamps Never Light

Susannah said...

I like it! :-)

My Magpie

Jingle said...

that's direct and powerful.
aptly put.

Kristen Haskell said...

Woo hoo that sounds like a fun night!

Helen said...

I agree with the good doctor ... short and sweet!!! And fun.

Brian Miller said...

ah, lamplight is romantic...
simple, very nice magpie...

Sender D. said...

Heart! Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

nothing like cutting to the chase...with clear motives and direction

Vicki Lane said...

You guys can only think of one thing...;-)

kathi harris said...

Yes!Yes!Yes!

Reflections said...

Simple, direct, maybe foretelling...

Katherine said...

Simple & Sensual! Nice Magpie!!!

Tumblewords: said...

Laughing -

willow said...

Oo-la-la!!

chiccoreal said...

"Tonight tonight!" Yes tonight! Simply divine!

Carrie Burtt said...

You make me smile so eloquently!
:-)