Thursday, September 30, 2010

Mag 34

Light the light . . .

pour the wine . . .

Tonight . . .

Tonight . . .

You'll be mine!

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20 comments:

  1. gautami tripathySeptember 30, 2010 at 10:25 PM

    Yay, yay!

    :D

    doomed if I do, doomed if I don't

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  2. Doctor FTSESeptember 30, 2010 at 11:42 PM

    Short and sweet! Try the rhythmic effect of one more syllable in the last line . . .

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  3. Erratic ThoughtsOctober 1, 2010 at 3:52 AM

    Wow...Short,hopeful with oozing confidence...!

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  4. MillieOctober 1, 2010 at 5:47 AM

    Lovely, short and sweet!

    Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/mag-34/

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  5. Arian TejanoOctober 1, 2010 at 6:36 AM

    quick & i love the stark appeal of the poem.

    When The Lamps Never Light

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  6. SusannahOctober 1, 2010 at 12:09 PM

    I like it! :-)

    My Magpie

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 1, 2010 at 12:42 PM

    that's direct and powerful.
    aptly put.

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  8. Kristen HaskellOctober 1, 2010 at 4:04 PM

    Woo hoo that sounds like a fun night!

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  9. HelenOctober 1, 2010 at 4:25 PM

    I agree with the good doctor ... short and sweet!!! And fun.

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  10. Brian MillerOctober 2, 2010 at 4:00 AM

    ah, lamplight is romantic...
    simple, very nice magpie...

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  11. UnknownOctober 2, 2010 at 9:44 AM

    Heart! Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender

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  12. UnknownOctober 2, 2010 at 11:56 AM

    nothing like cutting to the chase...with clear motives and direction

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  13. Vicki LaneOctober 2, 2010 at 12:04 PM

    You guys can only think of one thing...;-)

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  14. kathi harrisOctober 2, 2010 at 3:52 PM

    Yes!Yes!Yes!

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  15. ReflectionsOctober 2, 2010 at 9:33 PM

    Simple, direct, maybe foretelling...

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  16. KatherineOctober 3, 2010 at 1:18 AM

    Simple & Sensual! Nice Magpie!!!

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  17. Tumblewords:October 3, 2010 at 6:18 PM

    Laughing -

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  18. Tess KincaidOctober 4, 2010 at 5:57 AM

    Oo-la-la!!

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  19. chiccorealOctober 4, 2010 at 7:47 AM

    "Tonight tonight!" Yes tonight! Simply divine!

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  20. Carrie Van HornOctober 4, 2010 at 2:41 PM

    You make me smile so eloquently!
    :-)

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